3 Responses to “An Earthquake is a Polar Bear”
  1. cgreen says:

    Marcus you have chosen some powerful words to make the comparison with a polar bear. I particularly liked lunging, bulky and dynamic. I also liked the contrast at the end with the repeated word still, still, still.

  2. Marcus says:

    I like this poem alot. The metophor is good.

  3. Edward says:

    Very good and powerful words, Marcus, but there was a bit of hesitation. Better diction would have made it great.

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