4 Responses to “A Cheetah is a Powerful Wind”
  1. cgreen says:

    William you have made an effective comparison with a wind storm. You choose your words carefully to mimic the power of the storm and contrast this with the resting and waiting. I particularly liked the use of the repetition of waiting contrasted with the idea that he is ready to BOUNCE!

  2. Annabelle says:

    Well done William!! You made me visualise a cheetah as a wind blowing. I liked the choice of words you used as well.

  3. Luis says:

    Long poem and a good one.
    You did fantastic pronunciation

  4. temil says:

    William your poem was very effective and it was nice you used some repetition.

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